Monday, February 9, 2009

SENSE AND RESPONSE


What happens when a candle burns?
Does wax turn into air?
What happens when a fire glows?
Does matter disappear?

Can voices translate into light?
Can sounds become a prayer?
What happens when we speak to Him?
What takes our message there?

When carbon burns, electrons move –
Wax makes new energies –
The fire makes cool matter hum –
Creates electric bees.

The hive turns sound to radiance –
With colored frequencies –
Our words pass through glass fiber cells
In honeyed melodies.

(8 & 12 February 2009, Pleasant Grove, Utah)

3 comments:

Outsideofacat said...

wishing for a response poem.

Cynthia Hallen said...

Thank you for asking for a response. I have pondered, spoken with a physics skater, and added the response to the original verses.

Outsideofacat said...

clh, i like it! especially the bees. either part would work on its own, as well as together with the other, and i like that too. a very flexible creation.